I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bounjour Connor it is Lacie here. I like you blog post about the Mariana Trench.
Remember next time to add a sentance or two about what you had to do and why you had to do this. Also maybe next time change the color of the writing so it is easier for the reader to read. Why did you have to do this?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Bounjour Connor it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like you blog post about the Mariana Trench.
Remember next time to add a sentance or two about what you had to do and why you had to do this. Also maybe next time change the color of the writing so it is easier for the reader to read.
Why did you have to do this?