I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Connor, I love all the colours that you had added on all the different slides, Maybe next time you could add more decorations, Bye for now, Have a good day
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Connor,
ReplyDeleteI love all the colours that you had added on all the different slides,
Maybe next time you could add more decorations,
Bye for now, Have a good day
Hi Connor I love the backrounds. Maybe next time explain like the part where the song came in.
ReplyDeletekia ora connor i like your top picks i think more people should make top picks.next time you should make MORE.
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