I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Conner, This is a good way to show what you know about Personal and Private information. Next time you could add what you think about this info before the drawing. Other than that this is pretty good!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Conner,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good way to show what you know about Personal and Private information. Next time you could add what you think about this info before the drawing. Other than that this is pretty good!
thank you for going on my blog
Deletehi Conner it is micah you photo is pretty cool like you idea it is fun
ReplyDeletethank you for going on my blog Micah
Deletehi connor it is me, phoebe. I like how you make the personal and private and it is so cool! see ya!
ReplyDeletethank you for going on my blog Phoebe
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