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Wednesday 15 May 2019

the hole in the fence



Title: Hole in the fence:) 

One day there was a little boy. that was going around his house to take Photos. but he
Found a hole in the fence and he looks to see What it was .but he didn`t no What Was behind weird but he seen a whole bunch of flowers to take photos of and then a naughty person came up the Philippines and just spotted I'm looking through and he didn't know what to do so he ran:)

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Kian here that is a interesting story there maybe you could explain what the story is about and why you wrote it maybe just think about it bye .

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  2. Kio Aro Connor Its Kaycee From in your class

    i Really liked This story you made I Enjoyed it.you rembmed me When i Write a Story like this. Maybe next time you could add a bot more information. Blog you Later

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  3. Hey Nice Story It Is So Cool And Xstreem. By The Way It's Hakeem And You Should Make A Slide About MARVEL Or DC. :)

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