I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Connor. I like your blog post about white Sunday in Samoa. I like all the photos of the things. Maybe next time you could add more writing and less photos?
Hi Connor A . I like the way you put it on your blog and it is nice but you can put them all not caps. Made you can do it and then put it on your blog because it is cool I like it. Why did you put it on your blog?
Hi Connor A! i like this but can you work on adding some words in to this! if you not going to do the balck slide can you get rid of it! well i have to go bye Connor A
Kia Ora Connor A I like how you put all capitals in the start of your slide and the background white just to describe White Sunday. But can tell you to fix something? When you put "ABuoT" you spelled it wrong maybe you should put the U and the O switched places but it is good nice try of your spelling
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Connor.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about white Sunday in Samoa. I like all the photos of the things.
Maybe next time you could add more writing and less photos?
Blog you later
thank you Trinity for going on my blog
DeleteHi Connor A .
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put it on your blog and it is nice but you can put them all not caps.
Made you can do it and then put it on your blog because it is cool I like it.
Why did you put it on your blog?
thank you for going on my blog Linny
DeleteHi Connor A! i like this but can you work on adding some words in to this! if you not going to do the balck slide can you get rid of it! well i have to go bye Connor A
ReplyDeletethank you for going on blog Riley
DeleteKia Ora Connor A I like how you put all capitals in the start of your slide and the background white just to describe White Sunday. But can tell you to fix something? When you put "ABuoT" you spelled it wrong maybe you should put the U and the O switched places but it is good nice try of your spelling
ReplyDeletethank you for going on my blog Raewyn
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